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This is a slightly different post from me. I am very nervous about posting this as I am extremely self critical. However, I have decided to put myself out there as even criticism will help me grow. So here we go, this is the first paragraph or two of my novel. Bare in mind this is completely unedited.

‘She stood in the carpark chewing her lip ring, still so new it caused pain. Pain, which was a welcome distraction to the rising nausea in the pit of her stomach. Around her noises sounded amplified, she knew this was a necessity, it was important.

Every step towards the ticket booth made her feel trapped in a cage, a cage that was getting smaller and smaller. Her brow was sweaty, her hands clammy and the contents of her stomach threatened to make an appearance’

Thank you for reading.

The Stationery Geekette x

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